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Glen Cook – With Mercy Toward None

Tuesday, April 12th, 2011

As the second part of the prequel to the Dread Empire Trilogy, With Mercy Toward None (1985) by Glen Cook, starts with the events of the ending of the first book. As such it is a straight continuation of the story, but with a difference. The second part is a different kind of story. Whereas the first part, The Fire In His Hands, was very much contained in its setting, with only a small storyline telling the tale of an outsider, this story takes place very much outside that setting, moving in a fast pace. Another change is that it now becomes clearer who should be considered the good ones and the bad ones. The remarkable grayness of The Fire In His Hands is quite less there. The author clearly has taken up some favorites although he lets them go through some harsh adventures. Still they have the upper hand.

Several new characters are introduced in this sequel, which was clearly necessary as a fair number had died earlier. However, they remain rather two-dimensional except for one. In my view Cook loved this specific character a bit too much. The character is such an oddity that he is unbelievable and to me rather annoying. I don’t need to add that this had a negative effect on me enjoying the story.

With Mercy Toward None is troubled by more things. The succession of events that Cook lets take place also lack a certain validity. True, they are quite possible but create a tendency that distances the reader unless they were already rooting for certain characters.

Overall Cook follows the rapid expansion of Islam as an analogy to tell his story, adding in some peculiar elements of his own. It is this that keeps the reading experience strong enough to engage the reader. In what is actually a short book he manages to add in a lot of details and intrigues, creating a large complex world which in a sense remains vague, especially as Cook doesn’t work with a map, but does trigger the imagination. These are the strong traits of Cook, which he managed to use excellently in his later Black Company books. However, these prequels stand off rather bleak toward those books. They are quick and fun reads and for those who look for more in a story they can find them here. The earlier mentioned weaknesses do make me wonder if the actual Dread Empire Trilogy, which is a much earlier work, can be strong enough. Prequels can suffer weaknesses as they are limited by the later story, but on the other side a writer is usually developing after each book. I will continue with the actual trilogy, but with less anticipation.